Furrow Blue Prints What Do You Think About My Poem I Wrote?

What do you think about my poem I wrote? - furrow blue prints

Origianly title "marriage vows. Do not know.

Than
I want a little more time
Between the cobalt blue sky of dreams
And the empty stone cold black
From the Styx

Among the moments of green velvet
At the ends of the earth plane,
And the generosity of the "Crystal Clear
Of the rainbow frowned

Time to the Union is devoted entirely to you
Never first, never last, always true.
Stops at the simplicity
The winds of change sanctified

And courage is all it takes
To open
To find out, our heart
Him who calls us home.